Sunday, June 27, 2010

father planting
new violets
on his son's grave

(From Caribbean Kigo Kukai, June 2010)


silent walk ...
he doesn't hear
what I'm saying

(From my comment in Bill's blog.)
Posted by Tikkis at 8:47 AM

3 comments:

Bill said...

I'll repeat what I said at CKK: The image speaks for itself, and the poet stays out of the way.

Sunday, June 27, 2010 2:56:00 PM
eddie said...

Very good haiku

Monday, June 28, 2010 2:57:00 AM
Tikkis said...

Thanks Bill. As I said it's quite rewarding to write haikus in CKK.

Thanks Eddie, too.

Monday, July 05, 2010 1:11:00 PM

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