an echo
in the middle of the short night --
the sun is snoring
The Wheel
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Were their lives prearranged, I wonder? But how might that be possible? I
may or may not fear the truth. Actually, I don't feel much of anything at
all....
14 hours ago
3 comments:
Yes, very sleepy sun....yesterday I knocked at his door and he gave a sort of rant! :))
good 'ku, Tikkis :)
wishes,
devika
So that is what it was.
Congratulations on your strong showing in the CKK. I was the author of the comment on your poem.
Devika:
The sun got a good friend now; the full moon.
Bill:
Oh yes, I think I should borrow that text therefrom here too.
All the CKK texts inwoke many feelings; as a good haiku usually does.
And thanks for your comment there. This CKK is also some kind of haiku-laboratory.
All the credits for Gillena.
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