Wednesday, June 23, 2010

an echo
in the middle of the short night --
the sun is snoring

3 comments:

Devika said...

Yes, very sleepy sun....yesterday I knocked at his door and he gave a sort of rant! :))

good 'ku, Tikkis :)

wishes,
devika

Bill said...

So that is what it was.

Congratulations on your strong showing in the CKK. I was the author of the comment on your poem.

Tikkis said...

Devika:

The sun got a good friend now; the full moon.

Bill:

Oh yes, I think I should borrow that text therefrom here too.

All the CKK texts inwoke many feelings; as a good haiku usually does.

And thanks for your comment there. This CKK is also some kind of haiku-laboratory.

All the credits for Gillena.