Wednesday, June 09, 2010

#1

an old man coughing --
a sound
from olden times

#2

reached the hilltop --
found many new
clouds

4 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

still climbing
the mist
over the rainy mountain

much love
gillena

Ava said...

Awesome! You just painted a picture in my mind!

Bill said...

On #2, try it without the verbs

hilltop
so many
new clouds

Tikkis said...

Passing by on my trip to Vardo, Norway, but Bill: I think you are right!
Thanks for it.

Next week returning home.

(Now in Utsjoki.)