Tikkis

Wednesday, June 09, 2010

#1

an old man coughing --
a sound
from olden times

#2

reached the hilltop --
found many new
clouds

Gillena Cox said...: still climbing
the mist
over the rainy mountain

much love
gillena; Wednesday, June 09, 2010 9:53:00 AM
Ava said...: Awesome! You just painted a picture in my mind!; Wednesday, June 09, 2010 7:17:00 PM
Bill said...: On #2, try it without the verbs

hilltop
so many
new clouds; Thursday, June 10, 2010 9:22:00 AM
Tikkis said...: Passing by on my trip to Vardo, Norway, but Bill: I think you are right!
Thanks for it.

Next week returning home.

(Now in Utsjoki.); Sunday, June 13, 2010 2:00:00 AM