#1
an old man coughing --
a sound
from olden times
#2
reached the hilltop --
found many new
clouds
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who wants carrots
when flowers and chocolates are -
in every basket
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4 comments:
still climbing
the mist
over the rainy mountain
much love
gillena
Awesome! You just painted a picture in my mind!
On #2, try it without the verbs
hilltop
so many
new clouds
Passing by on my trip to Vardo, Norway, but Bill: I think you are right!
Thanks for it.
Next week returning home.
(Now in Utsjoki.)
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