red border -
I can hear our
neighbors
P.s.
At first the text was:
red border -
I can hear our neighbors
having some fun
2 hours ago
Friday, August 03, 2012
borders, neighbors
P.s.
At first the text was:
red border -
I can hear our neighbors
having some fun
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4 comments:
Nice revision, tikkis. Makes a real difference.
Both Tikkis have their own life, and good ones too, I think I made third one ;)
behind hoarding
neighbours hide
but the sound
i like the second version mre, leaves enough space for the reader to wander
much love...
Ashi. That sound ...
the sound calming down -
the train crossing
a swollen river
Gillena: Ok. Original was the truth, for a while. Then they had something to argue...
World peace
after another bottle
of white wine
(Mostly Finnish think Koskenkorva-vodka is like some kind of white wine...)
As King Harald told a story when returned from The Higlands (=Now Scotland): "They had some kind of brown wine over there, they called it Whiskey..." This happened around 1000 AD, I think.
Is it true, who cares.
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