Monday, April 01, 2013




Continuous
March winds disturbed
by sun rays?



4 comments:

Bill said...

"disturbed by sun rays" or "disturbing sun rays"

Tikkis said...

Bill:-)

I got several versions with this, very first one was as this:

continuous
March winds
disturbing the Sun rays.

Then looked at it and turned it upright:

the sun rays
continously disturbing
the March winds

I didn't like it.

After mixing that soup again and put it as it was...

I wonder whether there is enough elements? Something missing?

anyway:

Sunrays
attacking
March winds



Magyar said...

Is it array, or a ray? Smiles.
__Disturbing, the way in which the rays block the March winds!

__I like the "posted." _m

Tikkis said...

_m :-)

Array of This Spring...


chilly night -
in the morning
pepper-breakfast