long darkness --
an illuminated snowflake
appears in streetlight
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umbrella toss -
a breeze from nowhere
carries it
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Beautiful haiku, Tikkis san!
I introduced you to our readers on the website 'Akita International Haiku Network' on January 23.
Would you please check it out?
http://akitahaiku.wordpress.com/
Best wishes,
Hidenori Hiruta
stars
of this starless night
snow fall
__Love the "long darkness," Tikkis.
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Thanks Hiruta san!
a happy haiku
visited Japan --
a purring haiku-kitten
Magyar:
a notebook
filled with haiku --
morning´s snow
lovely image :-)
Light shining in darkness, and the darkness grasps it no.
I really liked this. I can hear the whispers of the flakes. Beautiful.
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