I don't like quoting. I never would attend a kukai. I think quoting kills poetry. I like the second ku. It's metaphor and a great image. Don't be concerned with this kukai. What really matters is your effort.
I like the first one - but there were some good one this time. It deserves points in any case!
I saw the picture in the second very clearly, but somehow it didn't touch as much as others.
Don't bother with me: it is great to read your lyrics, Tikkis. Points or not.
Best wishes Ralf
PS: A kukai is a game for poets with poems. Nothing serious, but fun. Who takes part, gets a wide range of quality to vote for - I love the playful character a lot (and have started a kukai in German ;-).
I know very well that you like kukai. I don't like kukai. Don't mind my comment. Certainly you know what Groucho Marx said: "I don’t want to belong to any club that will accept me as a member."
I agree to Croucho Marx - just writing without any membership.
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10 comments:
Very autumn, Tikkis...i liked both,
and this points/competition - am personally against it --
my pen
again points
to the pointlessness of life
wishes,
devika
of forgot, its been long...Hope you are doing well :)
And nice additions, too
wishes,
devika
Fine set Tikkis!
Falling leaves... captured by the winds... explore another realm.
As always! _m
Dear Juhani,
I don't like quoting. I never would attend a kukai. I think quoting kills poetry.
I like the second ku. It's metaphor and a great image.
Don't be concerned with this kukai. What really matters is your effort.
Best wishes
Rudi
Thanks for Devika's pen!
& you got a good point!
Magyar: Thanks, as this autumn continuing freezing itself we must live here. And it's fun.
- I have nowadays studied Mr. Gary Snyder. A good man. My friend publishing a translation of Mountains and Rivers without End.
Otherwise I have not written in English so much. Perhaps later, again?
Rudi: I agree with you. I put those twins here because I like those, there is a short story behind those but never mind, now.
Kukai's archices did not work a year or two ago; now those are again working, I think.
- Here in Finland many so called - poets are "writing" and publishing Google-poems. Text googled I suppose.
- Poetry???
Here is one I'm quoting from my head:
The sea
drunk some oil --
Golf Stream stammering
--Polish scientiest say that because of Gulf of Mexico's oil spillage The Golf Stream will stop. That means somewhat chilled here!
Who pays our warming expenses?
Juhani,
essas folhas são o tapete para o mais...
I like the first one - but there were some good one this time. It deserves points in any case!
I saw the picture in the second very clearly, but somehow it didn't touch as much as others.
Don't bother with me: it is great to read your lyrics, Tikkis. Points or not.
Best wishes
Ralf
PS: A kukai is a game for poets with poems. Nothing serious, but fun. Who takes part, gets a wide range of quality to vote for - I love the playful character a lot (and have started a kukai in German ;-).
Hi Ralf,
I know very well that you like kukai. I don't like kukai. Don't mind my comment.
Certainly you know what Groucho Marx said:
"I don’t want to belong to any club that will accept me as a member."
I agree to Croucho Marx - just writing without any membership.
Best wishes
Rudi
Henrique:
warmly needed --
though the chilly nights
are not sleeping
Thanks visiting, visited also your blog. Nice!
Rudi & Ralf;
I think writing haiku with a good company is a excellent way to write haiku!
This Shiki Kukai I have followed many, many years.
After autumn storms
there are
none leaves left
Dear Rudi, dear Tikkis,
writing is not a way to victory. It is a way to show what you are. Feel. Think. Like. Love.
So is yours, I think.
Best wishes
Ralf
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