Sunday, October 24, 2010

Between me
and this autumn rain
one leaking umbrella

4 comments:

Devika said...

first it brought a smile....then think of it, it brought back memories of many old malayalam writers, a life i too have lived...very down to earth haiku, Tikkis, is what i felt :)

wishes,
devika

Magyar said...

__A drop... trickles down my neck;
a grand haiku! _m

Tikkis said...

Thanks for your comments;

My shoulders
and our lawn
wet

haiku-shelf said...

I like the sense of humour!

Best wishes,
Angelika