Bill: This was from a longer set, I voted this one as a winner.
Something not said: one that I ought to drive up there, to River Deatnu. Late May or early June. To see again those nights filled with bright sun. (And to climp up a new hill this time.) And to have a nice cup of black coffee (perhaps one beer also) in the European Union's Northernmost Pub. It's located in Nuorgam, Utsjoki.
We got southerly - southwesterly warm winds here. Still a winter up there.
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8 comments:
Beginning with "also" catches the reader off guard. Very effective.
are they rain clouds ?
much love
gillena
interesting tikkis
john
Bill:
This was from a longer set, I voted this one as a winner.
Something not said: one that I ought to drive up there, to River Deatnu. Late May or early June. To see again those nights filled with bright sun. (And to climp up a new hill this time.) And to have a nice cup of black coffee (perhaps one beer also) in the European Union's Northernmost Pub. It's located in Nuorgam, Utsjoki.
We got southerly - southwesterly warm winds here. Still a winter up there.
under a thick ice
not a sound of water --
Deatnu
Deatnu = Teno in Finnish, a big river
Gillena:
traveling clouds
passing us
high up
Thanks John. (Some of our clouds are perhaps from the west coast of the North Sea?)
Tides in Granton --
the sea breathes out,
breathes in
Ooooo, I like those northerly clouds, Tikkis! _m
an engines cloud
this runner to the north
tracks clatter
Makes me think, but the whole thing sounds like "had not ime to finisch it"..
Best wishes
Ralf
Recession --
north-westerly winds
as corporate raiders
(... ash-clouds ...
ralf: (An interesting point!)
Scheluded
thoughts
not yet arrived
?-)
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