Sometimes a writer got an idea from it's quite impossible to get rid of ... Here is one my struggling dated March 2013:
1.
a vomiting cloud
emerging snowflakes
all over
Vomiting; some matter ejected from the stomach through the mouth to throw up. - ?
Checked some synonyms for throw: bowl, cast, fling, heave, hurl, pitch, sling, toss
a tossed cloud?
the clouds heaving
snowflakes
...
next sketch, # 2:
fresh snowflakes
emerging all over -
a vomiting cloud
Not so nice, this whole idea; vomiting cloud?
# 3:
emerged
new whirling snowflakes
all over wintry fields
Rewrote that as
# 4:
new whirling
snowflakes emerging
all over [wintry] fields
- Because "wintry" not needed, there is already at least one snowflake = a winter kigo.
Then I tasted the word "hurl" and tried it:
# 5:
from hurling clouds
snowflakes emerging
all over
next one is the latest on this battlefield:
# 6:
clouds hurling
emerging snowflakes
all over
I think a good poems must include at least one verb. And others say haiku must include a kigo word. Here it is snow(flake) = winter.
So, this seems to be a haiku?
:-)