Saturday, November 17, 2012

Textual wonders

dark energy -
all the windows
closed


Dark energy is a hypothetical form of energy that permeates all of space and tends to accelerate the expansion of the universe.

Gaza strip -
dark energy broke the light
through the windows



Windows is something Microsoft owns. Quite often I am using Linux.


not so quietly
world peace
buried

This format is as a hay(na)ku. Format is not so often used?






2 comments:

Magyar said...

__I weigh all views, but trust little of that which -we- are told these days; I, am on the side of life.

politicians
liars calling liars
liars

Not senryu, an aphorism... in senryu 'format.'
_m

Tikkis said...

:-) These grammatical discussions how to write something are sometimes very clever.

You can hide something behind those quarrels...


Nothind said
due to a wrong
format