Yesterday I visited Helsinki. The morning train was late. I got two cups of coffee. When returning back the train was late again. This time I wasn't in a hurry. I had one tin of beer & watched the whirling snow beside our train.
whirling snowstorm --
an express train
on its own
10 comments:
nice one tikkis
john
Good one, Tikkis --
on its own
the earth spins --
an imaginary world
trains delayed
due to rain/snow--
the world waits
drinking coffee
and beer
Fog, yet not
i can see it coming
the night train
Royalty and copyright, to Tikkis :)
wishes,
devika
Love that last line, tikkis
snow forecast
I take another sip
black no sugar
late train
I hear the screeching tracks
an icicle falls
Fine one Tikkis. _m
nice one Tikkis; stay warm
much love
gillena
Thanks, John!
Devika:
I woke up --
lost my ticket
to nowhere
this dusky afternoon --
some blurry coffee
left in a cup
(Sometimes I'll have some red wine in the train, too!)
Bill:
Goodie!
jammed
in heavy snow --
Café's door
Magyar:
two consenting
icicles
knitted together
Gillena; thanks!
afternoon sun
counting the shadows --
snowdrifts
At the counter
God asks me --
hell or heaven??
i said, either way, doeon't make any difference....after this life, what hell, what heaven!!
a payment by courier--
sharing my tea
with a courier boy
wishes,
devika
Devika:
The Heaven of Hell --
a warm greenhouse-rain
hissing
the courier boy
leaving the dishes
to me
Hi Tikkis,
I am off from blog-world and commmets...just came to say, hi, seeing your response... will continue to read on google and yes, always enjoy your verses :)
forget about the dishes, Be well and enjoy life :)
wishes,
devika
*** I am off from blog-world and comments
devika
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