Monday, June 10, 2013

How to desribe dusty

Kukai Free Format subject was DUST. May 2013.

My personal battlefield:

1.

dusty fields
spring rain flushing
withered [grass]straws


[all the single straws]

single? not married?-)


2.

[spring]rain flushing
all the wither
dusty straws

or

3.

dusty wind
trying to bend
withered straws



Tasted some days, wrote next one:

4.

thin clouds
passing
the new moon -

or/and:

5.

new moon hiding
behind
so thin clouds

?

[an unseen sky]


Then back to business:

6.

a dustied pencil
on an unused paper
email time-outed


and / or:

7.

a pencil made dustied
for a while -
bright rain,
sunny period.

Both meanings for "period"?


Meanwhile had to wash my car:

8.

dusty car
eagerly longing for
to a dusty highway


Somewhat tired? Next from my sketchbook:

9.

unwritten pages
on my sketchbook
gathering dust


[nesting dust} ?


Then additional pages lost somehere buried under the heaps of dust, I think.

a whirlwind
bending dusty corns
down, up, down


- earned no points.


bonus:

summer
rain shower
walking away
with dust






2 comments:

Bill said...

No dust on you, my friend.

Tikkis said...

our vacuum cleaner
disagree after visiting
under our bed

Anyway: hello Bill, nice to read you!