Thursday, February 24, 2011

chilly morning
a frozen sky
not breathing

4 comments:

Bill said...

I'd drop the dash at the end of line 1; that would open this to further interpretation, I think.

Tikkis said...

as a melting icicle
the dash
silenced away

;-)

John McDonald said...

love it tikkis
john

Gillena Cox said...

Line 2 pivots so well; much love...