Thursday, February 24, 2011

chilly morning
a frozen sky
not breathing


Bill said...

I'd drop the dash at the end of line 1; that would open this to further interpretation, I think.

Tikkis said...

as a melting icicle
the dash
silenced away


John McDonald said...

love it tikkis

Gillena Cox said...

Line 2 pivots so well; much love...