Friday, September 24, 2010



migrated cranes --
nightly sky so bright,
so bright


As a comment in:

http://haikubanditsociety.blogspot.com/2010/09/september-2010-moon-viewing-party.html



This is one from the series I posted (migrating cranes) in my blog 22nd September. And September 23rd night was so bright!

http://juhanitikkanen.blogspot.com/2010/09/porukalla-on-mukavaa-muuttolentaa.html

4 comments:

Ralf Bröker said...

Very fine image, very soundful verse!

Best wishes
Ralf

Magyar said...

...and the photo shows a different pattern to the wings... the up strokes and the down.
__Nice haiga, Tikkis! _m

Karol Rosiak said...

Good contrast, beautiful haiku.

K.

haiku-shelf said...

A good haiku!

I do like the repetition "...so bright,/so bright".

The migration of these birds is a repetition, to hear their cries is a repetition, to see their flight is a repetition -- AND it is a unique experience.

Best wishes,
Angelika