migrated cranes --
nightly sky so bright,
so bright
As a comment in:
http://haikubanditsociety.blogspot.com/2010/09/september-2010-moon-viewing-party.html
This is one from the series I posted (migrating cranes) in my blog 22nd September. And September 23rd night was so bright!
http://juhanitikkanen.blogspot.com/2010/09/porukalla-on-mukavaa-muuttolentaa.html
4 comments:
Very fine image, very soundful verse!
Best wishes
Ralf
...and the photo shows a different pattern to the wings... the up strokes and the down.
__Nice haiga, Tikkis! _m
Good contrast, beautiful haiku.
K.
A good haiku!
I do like the repetition "...so bright,/so bright".
The migration of these birds is a repetition, to hear their cries is a repetition, to see their flight is a repetition -- AND it is a unique experience.
Best wishes,
Angelika
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