Friday, September 24, 2010

migrated cranes --
nightly sky so bright,
so bright

As a comment in:

This is one from the series I posted (migrating cranes) in my blog 22nd September. And September 23rd night was so bright!


Ralf Bröker said...

Very fine image, very soundful verse!

Best wishes

Magyar said...

...and the photo shows a different pattern to the wings... the up strokes and the down.
__Nice haiga, Tikkis! _m

Karol Rosiak said...

Good contrast, beautiful haiku.


haiku-shelf said...

A good haiku!

I do like the repetition " bright,/so bright".

The migration of these birds is a repetition, to hear their cries is a repetition, to see their flight is a repetition -- AND it is a unique experience.

Best wishes,