The trains don't whistle anymore. I visited yesterday Helsinki for a short meeting. Got a pencil and wrote these, this one was #1:
smell
from an old snow -
bird whistling
I did not like the word "smell". Scent? Stink? What aroma snow's got? Then #2:
old snow
ebbing away -
a black bird!
The train was late. I checked the time and got slightly nervous. When arrived at Helsinki main railway station our train was 7 minutes late! When returning later back to Turku I wrote #3:
this year
melting snows seemingly
missing the train
When I was back at home again I was not at all worried how to make yourself clear in haiku-writing.
The black bird? - Perhaps just a rapid shadow?