chilly morning
a frozen sky
not breathing
Haibun (14)
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*8.19*
*PJCA’s First International Haiku Anthology 2026*
*Sakura Fubuki*
*桜吹雪*
*8.19 *
*PJCA**第**1**回国際俳句アンソロジー**2026*
*Sakura Fubuki*
*桜吹雪*...
14 hours ago

4 comments:
I'd drop the dash at the end of line 1; that would open this to further interpretation, I think.
as a melting icicle
the dash
silenced away
;-)
love it tikkis
john
Line 2 pivots so well; much love...
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