Tikkis

Sunday, October 24, 2010

Between me
and this autumn rain
one leaking umbrella

Devika Jyothi said...: first it brought a smile....then think of it, it brought back memories of many old malayalam writers, a life i too have lived...very down to earth haiku, Tikkis, is what i felt :)

wishes,
devika; Sunday, October 24, 2010 11:01:00 PM
Magyar said...: __A drop... trickles down my neck;
a grand haiku! _m; Friday, October 29, 2010 7:07:00 PM
Tikkis said...: Thanks for your comments;

My shoulders
and our lawn
wet; Saturday, October 30, 2010 3:53:00 AM
haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: I like the sense of humour!

Best wishes,
Angelika; Monday, November 01, 2010 12:56:00 PM