Ey, Tikkis, your Fiver is a modified Threeliner! And never ever in my little life I will understand why this sanguivorous animals is a female. This must be a ... vision ;-)
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Masajo 真砂女1961 Age 55
野分中波にのまれてしまひたき
nowake naka name ni nomarete shimaitaki
*Lee & Emiko’s English*
autumn gale---
to be sallowed by a wave
is my...
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__I first punched a key at this blog, on Friday the 13th, February 2009;
tomorrow is another Friday the 13th.
__To my 'new' like minded friends, and to my '...
5 comments:
hahaha!!
I LOVE ONE WHO KEEPS HIS PROMISE! :)
and how so beautifully you did it Tikkis...Now, here is mine
with his syringe
he comes humming
injects me,and
leaves, without
taking any fees
He is a nurse...a male mosquito.. :)
wishes,
devika
Ey, Tikkis, your Fiver is a modified Threeliner! And never ever in my little life I will understand why this sanguivorous animals is a female. This must be a ... vision ;-)
five lines
on one stroke --
smiling poet
Best wishes
Ralf
Devika:
Hmmmnn,,, I don't say anything what I'm thinking, - a male mosquito, ;-)
Ralf:
Cramp in the hand --
three lines,
four lines,
five.
Relaxing!
Ps. When studied morse telegraphy our teacher warned us to beware of hand's cramp!
Anyway, right you are!
But if there is very good haiku by Santoka in only two lines,
why not in four, even five lines?
(I know this is not so wise idea?)
Unskilled haiku-poet
wasting five lines --
saying nothing
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P.s. A bonus:
Señor Mosquito
leaving in the morning --
sleepy morning mist
I don't care about number of lines, but I love verse which make me laugh.
Best wishes
Ralf
I know what you are thinking, Tikkis....but, don't ask me...I won't tell! :)
devika
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