Tuesday, June 30, 2009


sharpened
my pencils --
this time
going to write
a five-liner haiku?

6 comments:

Devika said...

Use one pencil for one line, then possibly you will be able to complete it! :))

kidding, nice one, Tikkis :)

wishes,
devika

Tikkis said...

I love these pencils, as you see four of those are Copying-pencils, meaning their "lead" is including some aniline. With those it's very smooth to write. Forbidden nowadays, (something poison?) but I am careful and don't "eat" those.

criminal
poet writing
poisonous texts

;-(

Devika said...

I could be as criminal as you! :)

a criminal lawyer could be more criminal than the most criminal of all criminals, they say

my father was, for a short while though, and I have a full family of them...I passed my LLb with that intention....but then left it...to become a writer :)

eating lead....compared to coffee, pencil lead could be less harmful :)

wishes,
devika

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

love the humour here
john

RBroeker said...

Yes, great fun!

May I suggest to think about "haiku" in line five? Without it and with a little bit of work in the layout it would make a price-worth haiga (if I was the judge anyway).

Best wishes
Ralf

Tikkis said...

Devika:
Pencils "lead" is some kind of graphite?

When a copying pencil is moistened it's like a pen.


Thanks John!


Ralf:

Sharpened my pencils --
this time I'm writing
a winner!